general commentary citation + dates review for official disco

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/album/cherubim.yaml b/album/cherubim.yaml
index 64c818fa..a986c260 100644
--- a/album/cherubim.yaml
+++ b/album/cherubim.yaml
@@ -84,7 +84,8 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Reverie, Power Fantasy - Unknown.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Alex Rosetti:</i>
+    <i>Alex Rosetti:</i> (composer, via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]])
+
     i made this song its abou tcallpope shes the girl troll on the web cartonn 'homsockers' an she lives on the moon with her brother cazzbiborn baggin of rivendale were they play chess she isnt as good as it as cazbio l and he beats her this song is about when she was before he bit her le g fof
     he is such a good goadlie and im tryhing to anticipate where hes going next i'm perfectly fine where i am im like where where wheere s your move tell me why im wrong
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@@ -158,7 +159,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Carne Vale - Unknown.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> ([Tumblr](https://dragonxvi.tumblr.com/post/45686990686/carne-vale-a-commentary), 03/18/2013)
+    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://dragonxvi.tumblr.com/post/45686990686/carne-vale-a-commentary), 03/18/2013)
 
     <u>Carne Vale</u>
 
@@ -286,7 +287,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     What really sealed in the atmosphere of this track was the huge slather of pads that adorned the track, most of which were created using analog equipment. I fed the signal from an old Radio Shack keyboard with basic midi patches through a pawn shop guitar pedal to create the many layers of sound that fill the background. Some of the most excellent sounds on the track (especially that snarling synth at 2:57) were created by hammering the mod knobs and wah-wah pedal while playing atonal pitches. The result is distorted synth excellence.
 
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Michael Guy Bowman Talks About His Homestuck Music](https://youtu.be/85VXWZTg-vo?t=1965), adapted to text, 7/20/2024)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([Michael Guy Bowman Talks About His Homestuck Music](https://youtu.be/85VXWZTg-vo?t=1965), adapted to text, 7/20/2024)
 
     And then in the later years of the comic... 2013 was my final actual production that was a contribution to it. I did Constant Conquest, another piece of work with Erik. I took the Caliborn side of it and Erik took the Calliope side of it. Erik wrote the Calliope theme first, Constant Confinement, and I took the theme from that and decided to just go... real crazy industrial with it.
 
@@ -414,7 +415,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Another piece by [[artist:malcolm-brown|M. Brown]]. I told you we had entered [[track:unite-synchronization|the Brown Zone]], but you didn't listen. It's not in an album yet, and won't be for a little while. Not until some time after Solo Album Month, which according to my calendar is happening [[album:symphony-impossible-to-play|REALLY SOON]].
 
-    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i>
+    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (composer, via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]])
 
     First off, a thanks to the folk who enjoyed EsC.
 
@@ -438,7 +439,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Hope that answers ya'lls questions :)
 
-    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://dragonxvi.tumblr.com/post/28573051810/eternitys-shylock-a-short-commentary), 08/02/2012)
+    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> ([Tumblr](https://dragonxvi.tumblr.com/post/28573051810/eternitys-shylock-a-short-commentary), 08/02/2012)
 
     <img src="media/misc/04681.gif" width="300" warning="motion warning">