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     <i>Toris Crow:</i>
     This piece was written for Rufioh Nitram and specifically, his clan, the Lost Weeaboos. The instrumentation was based off [["The Brave and the Bronze"]] by Yan "Nucleose" Rodriguez, with the percussion beat coming from Tavros's song [["dESPERADO ROCKET CHAIRS,"]] by Toby "Radiation" Fox. Its musical connection to Rufioh is mostly open for interpretation. This song's alternate name in [[album:chimera|my own album]] is [["La Tauromaquia,"]] meaning "bullfighting" in Spanish.
     <i>rockytoad:</i>
-    When I was figuring out what th draw for the song, I did pay attention to the song's name and also alternate name. Hearing "weeaboo" made me want to put kitty ears on Rufioh, but I scrapped that idea and instea dfocussed on the bullfighting aspect of the song first and foremost. Since Rufioh is kind of a silly character, I thught that it'd be great to gie him one of those little pony riding sticks with a bull for the head. After I finished drawing the main part of the drawing, I was still trying to figure out how to incorporate "weeaboo"-ness into it. Well, weeaboo makes me think of kitties and anime, so my mind went to Nyan Cat. Perfect, I thought, I'll add some Goold Ol' Nyan Cat rainbows, haha. And then, of course, glitter becaus anime. It came out really colorful and I'm happy with it.
+    When I was figuring out what th draw for the song, I did pay attention to the song's name and also alternate name. Hearing "weeaboo" made me want to put kitty ears on Rufioh, but I scrapped that idea and instead focussed on the bullfighting aspect of the song first and foremost. Since Rufioh is kind of a silly character, I thought that it'd be great to give him one of those little pony riding sticks with a bull for the head. After I finished drawing the main part of the drawing, I was still trying to figure out how to incorporate "weaboo"-ness into it. Well, weeaboo makes me think of kitties and anime, so my mind went to Nyan Cat. Perfect, I thought, I'll add some Goold Ol' Nyan Cat rainbows, haha. And then, of course, glitter because anime. It came out really colorful and I'm happy with it.
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 Track: Life With Peace
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     Listening to this track, I had the distinct image of Kurloz falling through sopor slime into the void. Not long after, the dream self between being asleep in his cocoon on Beforus and the kingdom of Prospit was an overwhelming image. It certainly called for something that looked a bit dramatic and fuzzy, the way things feel when you aren't sure if you're awake or dreaming and in that state where you can be stratled awake by the feeling you've crashed back onto the mattress, literally falling awake after just barely falling asleep.
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 Track: 50M3 GR347 4C7 0F H3R015M
-Main Release: Test Track
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 - Some Great Act of Heroism (quirk-free)
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 - 'cw: eye horror'
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Toris Crow:</i>
-    This was written specifically as a theme fro Mituna Captor. I wrote it as a chiptune based loosely off of the Mega Man soundtrack because of Mituna's canon nickname, "Mega Man Sollux." This song was my first test for some chiptune percussion I found in the depths of my hard drive, and thus is alternatively named [[track:test-track|"Test Track"]] in [[album:ambrosios|one of my own albums.]] The actual name came from Aranea's short biography on him from Openbound, in which she states that "some great act of heroism" is what burnt out his psychic powers and shattered his mind.
+    This was written specifically as a theme for Mituna Captor. I wrote it as a chiptune based loosely off of the Mega Man soundtrack because of Mituna's canon nickname, "Mega Man Sollux." This song was my first test for some chiptune percussion I found in the depths of my hard drive, and thus is alternatively named [[track:test-track|"Test Track"]] in [[album:ambrosios|one of my own albums.]] The actual name came from Aranea's short biography on him from Openbound, in which she states that "some great act of heroism" is what burnt out his psychic powers and shattered his mind.
     <i>Gene:</i>
-    Mituna's track revolves around the event that caused him to lose his power, which is what I've chosen to depict. I decided to translate the chiptune into something visuall resembling a computer error, mirroring the "error" in Mituna's brain.
+    Mituna's track revolves around the event that caused him to lose his power, which is what I've chosen to depict. I decided to translate the chiptune into something visually resembling a computer error, mirroring the "error" in Mituna's brain.
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 Track: Time's Apostate
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