general commentary citation + dates review for official disco

1 files changed, 44 insertions, 44 deletions

diff --git a/album/alterniabound.yaml b/album/alterniabound.yaml
index 3322c74e..d99c5d27 100644
--- a/album/alterniabound.yaml
+++ b/album/alterniabound.yaml
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Terezi
 - Meteor
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i>
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Bad news for everyone.
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
     Toki no hime wa inu wo tometa
     Toki no hime wa inu wo tometa
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Tensei:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Tensei:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Aradia's Homecoming)
 
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Coincidentally, the album version of this song is actually a version that was remastered at a lower volume level to fit in better with the album. The original versions (i.e. the versions that I mastered myself) of "Arisen Anew" and "She's a Sp8der" will be available for free in 192 kbps mp3 format on my tindeck account.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     So why start with this track? [[album:strife|Tensei's album]] was last, so starting with another solid track by him starts us off with a good impression and holds the listener up from where they were. It's almost like an unofficial continuation of his album's narrative this way... sorta like musical fanfiction, I guess.
 
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - "Karkat's Theme - Unknown.mid"
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i>
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Karkat Walkabout)
 
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Trollcops - Zelthra.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Erik Scheele:</i>
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Alternate Universe Intermission)
 
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Besides that, I dunno, just enjoy it.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     Don't tell anyone, but this is actually a remix of one of Jit's old fansongs called [[track:under-the-hat-lofam|'Under the Hat,']] which was a battle theme for Dad. So if your heart still pines for him... his soul and pipe are contained deep within this track.
 
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'BL1ND JUST1C3 - 1NV3ST1G4T1ON !! - Sky Island.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Terezi Investigates)
 
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <code style="color: #008b8b">HOP3 YOU L1K3 1T, 1T W4S 4 PL34SUR3 TO M4K3!</code>
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     People kept asking me for a Phoenix Wright remix of [[The Lemonsnout Turnabout|Lemonsnout Turnabout]], so Malcolm creating this was essentially a miracle, especially considering he hadn't been around [[Squiddidle!|since Squiddles]].
 
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - "Terezi's Theme - Moondelev (piano).mid"
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Terezi Walkabout)
 
@@ -386,13 +386,13 @@ Sheet Music Files:
   Files:
   - Dreamers and The Dead - Thomas Ferkol.pdf
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (World of the Afterlife)
 
     A piece for the characters in the afterlife, mainly Feferi, and the general ambience of the dream bubbles. Originally, I tried a mix of various brass instruments, percussion, string orchestra, koto, and an electric bass. It didn't feel right. So I pushed that piece aside altogether and restarted with an instrumentation more reminiscent of that used in [[Cuddlefish|"Cuddlefish,"]] the troll theme I made for Feferi right before I joined the music team. The intro piano was meant to feel spacey, reminiscent of [[Eldritch|"Eldritch"]] and [[English|"English,"]] sort of bringing the listener into the afterlife. When the flute enters, I feel that this was as Feferi communicated with the Elder Gods of setting up her dream bubble. The orchestral crescendo brings us to the area deep in space where the bubbles float. From then on, we travel past several bubbles, just absorbing the scenery. The rest of the piece contains glimpses of other events within the bubbles, such as Feferi and Jade's dream chats and the shocking developments concerning the troll session's guardian code. And, of course, a major key ending for all the happy folks floating around in the afterlife.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     Thomas is continually on point with his orchestral stuff. He actually made a bunch of awesome troll-related tracks that are on his tindeck.
 
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - "Vriska's Theme - Unknown (piano, partial).mid"
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Vriska Walkabout)
 
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Eridan's Theme
 - Crustacean
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Tensei:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Tensei:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Adventure on the High Seas)
 
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     When writing this song, I kinda envisioned a big ship to ship battle between Vriska and Eridan, with a bumbling Karkat acting as comic relief at the very end. It's actually quite remarkable how well the song translates to a Mindfang/Dualscar theme song, even though it wasn't really intended as such when I wrote it.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     I love this track. The end is some serious Skipper Plumbthroat shit. Cue Karkat the Angry Crab pinches him on the nose. Tee hee.
 
@@ -511,7 +511,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'FIDUSPAWN, GO! - Twix Stix.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>David Ko:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>David Ko:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Tavros' Battle Theme)
 
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Listen closely and you can hear snippets of other Homestuck pieces! I absolutely love doing this. (Most of my other songs feature the opening notes of [[Vagabounce]] somewhere. [[artist:david-ko|Ooh, go find them!]] It's like a treasure hunt!)
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i>
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (arranger, booklet commentary)
 
     This track was awesome to work on. David's songs are always really darn fun, and while fiddling around with it I was barely cognizant of the irony that I was arranging someone else's remix of my own track. Hope you all enjoy the little touches I did with the drums and the weird guitar-ish NES synth.
 
@@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Darling Kanaya - Unknown (piano).mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Kanaya Walkabout)
 
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Requiem of Sunshine and Rainbows - Unknown (piano).mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Paige Turner:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Paige Turner:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Rainbow Drinker Kanaya)
 
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     All the song titles from the SotN soundtrack have appropriately gloomy and foreboding names like ["Moonlight Nocturne"](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J-pi8c6Ese8), ["Requiuem for the Gods"](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wIlXbaYudXY), ["Land of Benediction"](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ao7ATGYquBU) and ["Death Ballad"](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7I9je7sc-wI). Kanaya is basically the Alternian equivalent of a goth, and I've always found it hilarious how goths and vampire-fans on her world are all about sunshine and rainbows, so I thought it would be funny to incorporate that weird dichotomy into the title.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     I like the idea of having two diametrically opposed Kanaya tracks one right after the other. Saves me the trouble of pointlessly bifurcating Kanaya's song like the other ones.
 
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - "Eridan's Theme - IronInvoker47 (piano).mid"
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>David Ko:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>David Ko:</i> (lyricist, booklet commentary)
 
     (Eridan Walkabout)
 
@@ -685,7 +685,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     Just resign to your fate.<br>
     Soon you'll be made into Gl'Bgolyb bait.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     Lyrics by [[artist:david-ko]].
 
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Sollux
 - Eridan
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Eridan Boss Battle)
 
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Walls Covered In Blood
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Nepeta Walkabout)
 
@@ -779,7 +779,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Horschestra
 - Walls Covered In Blood
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Alex Rosetti:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Alex Rosetti:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Equius Walkabout)
 
@@ -787,7 +787,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Neigh neigh neigh neigh. Neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh neigh.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     Neigh neigh neigh, neigh neigh.
 
@@ -829,7 +829,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
     (Miracles)
     Miracles
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (honk provider, booklet commentary)
 
     (Prelude to a Killer Clown)
 
@@ -859,7 +859,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Gamzee
 - Meteor
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Mark J. Hadley:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Mark J. Hadley:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Gamzee the Killer)
 
@@ -867,7 +867,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     On a side note, I think I enjoy writing creepy music more than any other kind of music.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     Soundtrack-wise... I think this was one of the greatest moments of Homestuck. This track makes my hair stand on end.
 
@@ -902,7 +902,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
 
     Go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go!
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     HOW TO WRITE MUSIC<br>
     STEP 1: WRITE STRONG GUITAR<br>
@@ -913,7 +913,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     (Samples from "Number of the Beast" by Iron Maiden and "The Riddle Wants to Be" by Madder Mortem.)
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     Thomas composed this right after [[flash:3438|the flash]] between Gamzee and Equius... if you can, just imagine the beginning of the song playing as Gamzee stares into Equius's face... and then the "YEAHHHHHH!!!!" just as Equius breaks the string around his neck with a manly flex.
 
@@ -941,7 +941,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Lil Cal
 - 'cw: blood'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Tensei:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Tensei:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Triple Showdown Combo)
 
@@ -951,7 +951,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Stylistically I basically just tried to make it soun as spaghetti western-ish as possible, but I combined it with a bunch of horror movie style ambient sounds (and honks, obviously).
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     An awesome track that sets up really well... [[Rex Duodecim Angelus|for the next one.]]
 
@@ -1003,7 +1003,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Rex Duodecim Angelus - Doowhacker.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Final Battle Against the Black King)
 
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     5:39 - Vriska steps up, and finishes it. With one impossi8ly lucky roll.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     I'm incredibly flattered to have such an awesome track feature so many pieces of music by myself... another miracle from the guy who brought you [[Showtime (Original Mix)|Showtime]], folks.
 
@@ -1066,7 +1066,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Spider's Claw
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (God-Vriska's Finest Hour)
 
@@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Alternia - Geekthras (piano).mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Seth Peelle:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Seth Peelle:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Hivebent)
 
@@ -1117,7 +1117,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     It is, in essence, the Trolls' lingering and bittersweet memory of Hope.
 
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (album organizer, booklet commentary)
 
     Beatfox, it is a great honor.
 
@@ -1181,7 +1181,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Nepeta
 - 'cw: blood (abstract)'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (I KILL ANIMALS!!!)
 
@@ -1210,7 +1210,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Eridan
 - Meteor
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (PISCES PRINCESS)
 
@@ -1243,7 +1243,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Underlings
 - Alternia
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     (Kanaya Battle Theme?)
 
@@ -1312,7 +1312,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'The Blind Prophet - Unknown.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     my thoughts:
 
@@ -1344,7 +1344,7 @@ Cover Art File Extension: jpg
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Theme
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     These aren't "true" pieces... just jingles based off of [[Theme|"Theme"]]. But I hope that for all their insignificance, they really instill the idea of a game inside of you.
 
@@ -1364,7 +1364,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Theme
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     When you win a battle on Alternia, this song plays. No one knows who's singing.
 
@@ -1386,7 +1386,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Theme
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (booklet commentary)
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     And with that.... good night.