the twilight reverie ref fixes + commentary

2 files changed, 37 insertions, 2 deletions

diff --git a/album/the-twilight-reverie.yaml b/album/the-twilight-reverie.yaml
index 165966d..4ffdd1f 100644
--- a/album/the-twilight-reverie.yaml
+++ b/album/the-twilight-reverie.yaml
@@ -29,6 +29,16 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Doctor
 - Game Main Theme (Piano Sketch)
 - Nightmare Knight
+Sampled Tracks:
+- Amen, Brother
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Maukustus:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1239313066177331241))
+
+    one other really hard thing to hear is this sample of an amen break i added for no reason
+
+    ([[media:misc/breaks_imagine_a_funny_smiley_face_here.wav|breaks_imagine_a_funny_smiley_face_here.wav]])
+
+    the amen breaks just get drowned by all the really loud guitars and other stuff
 ---
 Track: The Twilight Reverie (Extended Mix)
 Duration: '3:30'
@@ -38,11 +48,33 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - The Twilight Reverie
 - Showtime (Original Mix)
 - Crystalanthemums
-- Umbral Ultimatum
+- The Blind Prophet
 - English
 - Liquid Negrocity
 - Sburban Jungle
+Sampled Tracks:
+- Amen, Brother
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Maukustus:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://maukustus.bandcamp.com/track/the-twilight-reverie-extended-mix))
 
     This one has an additional part, with references to many Homestuck tracks.
+
+    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
+
+    Regarding the reference to [[The Blind Prophet]], which is really a reference to its adaptation (1:23–1:28) of [[Courser]]:
+
+    <i>Maukustus:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1239307985747054723), excerpts)
+
+    alright so theres this piano counter melody thingy at the last guitar part, it's very hard to hear but i think that last melody thingy is in the blind prophet version only
+
+    <img src="media/misc/the-twilight-reverie-courser.png" width="325">
+
+    heres a render with only the guitars and piano from that moment
+
+    ([[media:misc/ultimate_guitar_kit_my_beloved.wav|ultimate_guitar_kit_my_beloved.wav]])
+
+    the extended one is mostly the same as the main one, just with an additional guitar part
+
+    i think i sort of understand toby a little (nothing ever sounds right)
+
+    <img src="media/misc/the-twilight-reverie-revisions.png" width="325">
diff --git a/static-page/changelog.yaml b/static-page/changelog.yaml
index 2d1fc19..2ca2c12 100644
--- a/static-page/changelog.yaml
+++ b/static-page/changelog.yaml
@@ -38,8 +38,11 @@ Style: |-
 Content: |-
     <h2 id="15-may-2024"><html:a href="#15-may-2024">[[date:15 May 2024]] - midmay mayhem</a></h2>
     <h3>additions</h3>
-    - added commentary from Tumblr by [[artist:toby-fox]] to [[album:the-greatest-living-show]] (thanks, vriska/leo!)
+    - added commentary (Discord) from [[artist:maukustus]] to [[album-commentary:the-twilight-reverie]] (thanks, Maukustus!)
+    - added commentary (Tumblr) from [[artist:toby-fox]] to [[album:the-greatest-living-show]] (thanks, vriska/leo!)
     <h3>data fixes</h3>
+    - fixed [[track:the-twilight-reverie]] and [[track:the-twilight-reverie-extended-mix]] not sampling [[track:amen-brother]] (thanks, Maukustus!)
+    - fixed [[track:the-twilight-reverie-extended-mix]] referencing [[track:umbral-ultimatum]] instead of [[track:the-blind-prophet]] (thanks, Maukustus!)
     - fixed [[track:battle-lorekeeper-zinnia]] not referencing [[track:the-heirs-to-eternity]] (thanks, vriska/leo!)
     - fixed mistaken lyrics in [[track:sunsetter-ska]] (thanks, vriska/leo!)