pale rain commentary tweaks & changelog entry

2 files changed, 34 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/album/pale-rain.yaml b/album/pale-rain.yaml
index 76def2b..4ba6c15 100644
--- a/album/pale-rain.yaml
+++ b/album/pale-rain.yaml
@@ -22,6 +22,39 @@ Wallpaper Artists:
 - Unknown Artist
 - Morris (crop for wiki)
 Wallpaper File Extension: png
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509864776046084098), 04/01/2022)
+
+    My music's in the new Pocari Sweat commercial!? [[track:pale-rain-toby-fox-piano-ver|My piano song]] was sampled in a cool track with [[artist:imase]] and [[artist:punpee|PUNPEE]].
+
+    なんと、ポカリスエットのCM「羽はいらない」に僕のピアノの演奏がサンプリングされました！[[artist:imase]]さんと[[artist:punpee|PUNPEE]]さんの曲カッコいいですネ！
+
+    [youtube.com/watch?v=tjufDl8JxlE](https://web.archive.org/web/20220401122136/https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tjufDl8JxlE)
+
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509865717134692352), 04/01/2022)
+
+    There's actually an alternate version of the commercial with just [[track:pale-rain-toby-fox-piano-ver|my piano song]]. (Mmm, tastes like MIDI...)
+
+    ポカリスエットCM、実は「[[track:pale-rain-toby-fox-piano-ver|トビーフォックスピアノバージョン]]」もあります！こっちは僕のピアノ曲がメインに…？！（もぐもぐ、MIDIの味がするよ！)
+
+    [youtube.com/watch?v=pd_4cPQS7N0](https://web.archive.org/web/20220401120355/https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pd_4cPQS7N0)
+
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509866835281604608), 04/01/2022)
+
+    A ton of talent and effort was put into this CM. There's a whole making-of on it... (You can hear [[artist:punpee|PUNPEE]]'s rap verse too...)
+    このCM製作は、才能と努力の大爆発でした。メイキング動画もありますよ！（[[artist:punpee|PUNPEE]]さんのラップも聞こえてくるよ...やったー！）
+
+    [youtube.com/watch?v=QaDx-59jKtA](https://web.archive.org/web/20220401120944/https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QaDx-59jKtA)
+
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509910381938249729), 04/01/2022)
+
+    You might be wondering how the heck this happened. Well, originally they wanted to sample [[track:hopes-and-dreams|Hopes and Dreams]]. (!?)  But, that song is personal to me, so I asked "Can I just make a similar song instead?" And they let me...
+
+    Thanks! It was really fun to get to do something like this.
+
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509910508169998337), 04/01/2022)
+
+    もともとは[[group:undertale-and-deltarune|UNDERTALE]]の「[[track:hopes-and-dreams|夢と希望]]」のサンプリング許可を聞かれてました。でも、僕にとって特別な曲なので…代わりに新しい曲を作るのはいかがですか？と提案をしたところ、なんとOKを頂きました！？すごく楽しい経験でした！ありがとうございます！
 ---
 Track: Pale Rain
 Duration: '3:41'
@@ -104,26 +137,3 @@ Lyrics: |-
     今
 
     Pale rain
-Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509864776046084098), 04/01/2022)
-    My music's in the new Pocari Sweat commercial!? [[track:pale-rain-toby-fox-piano-ver|My piano song]] was sampled in a cool track with [[artist:imase]] and [[artist:punpee|PUNPEE]].
-    なんと、ポカリスエットのCM「羽はいらない」に僕のピアノの演奏がサンプリングされました！[[artist:imase]]さんと[[artist:punpee|PUNPEE]]さんの曲カッコいいですネ！
-    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tjufDl8JxlE
-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509865717134692352), 04/01/2022)
-    There's actually an alternate version of the commercial with just [[track:pale-rain-toby-fox-piano-ver|my piano song]]. (Mmm, tastes like MIDI...)
-    ポカリスエットCM、実は「[[track:pale-rain-toby-fox-piano-ver|トビーフォックスピアノバージョン]]」もあります！こっちは僕のピアノ曲がメインに…？！（もぐもぐ、MIDIの味がするよ！)
-    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pd_4cPQS7N0
-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509866835281604608), 04/01/2022)
-    A ton of talent and effort was put into this CM. There's a whole making-of on it... (You can hear [[artist:punpee|PUNPEE]]'s rap verse too...)
-    このCM製作は、才能と努力の大爆発でした。メイキング動画もありますよ！（[[artist:punpee|PUNPEE]]さんのラップも聞こえてくるよ...やったー！）
-    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QaDx-59jKtA
-    
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509910381938249729), 04/01/2022)
-    You might be wondering how the heck this happened. Well, originally they wanted to sample [[track:hopes-and-dreams|Hopes and Dreams]]. (!?)  But, that song is personal to me, so I asked "Can I just make a similar song instead?" And they let me...
-
-    Thanks! It was really fun to get to do something like this.
-    
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/tobyfox/status/1509910508169998337), 04/01/2022)
-    もともとは[[group:undertale-and-deltarune|UNDERTALE]]の「[[track:hopes-and-dreams|夢と希望]]」のサンプリング許可を聞かれてました。でも、僕にとって特別な曲なので…代わりに新しい曲を作るのはいかがですか？と提案をしたところ、なんとOKを頂きました！？すごく楽しい経験でした！ありがとうございます！
diff --git a/static-page/changelog.yaml b/static-page/changelog.yaml
index 024c102..d432e47 100644
--- a/static-page/changelog.yaml
+++ b/static-page/changelog.yaml
@@ -45,6 +45,7 @@ Content: |-
     - added [[album:puppeteer-beforus-single]] by [[artist:thesketchqueen]]! (thanks, Lilith!)
     - added [[album:versus-hardmode-remix]] by [[artist:ludicrousfalcon]]! (thanks, Lilith!)
     - added [[album:terminal-mayonakas-theme]] by [[artist:pascal-van-den-bos]]! (thanks, Jebb!)
+    - added [[album:pale-rain]] by [[artist:imase]], [[artist:punpee]], and [[group:toby-fox]]! (thanks, Morris!)
     - added [[album:love-letters]] by [[group:circlejourney]]! (thanks, Jebb!)
     - added [[album:unknown-diva]] by [[artist:amane-kanata]]! (thanks, Morris!)
     - added [[album:im-your-treasure-box]] by [[artist:houshou-marine]]! (thanks, Morris!)