changelog + misc review

3 files changed, 78 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/album/early-access.yaml b/album/early-access.yaml
index 011b720f..95ce4e8f 100644
--- a/album/early-access.yaml
+++ b/album/early-access.yaml
@@ -53,7 +53,8 @@ Sampled Tracks:
 Lyrics: |-
     Make her a member of the Midnight Crew...
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>dbnet18:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/year-one))
+    @@ [Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/year-one)
+
     Originally titled "OMEGA Anniversary Edition"
 ---
 Track: Cog
@@ -68,7 +69,7 @@ URLs:
 Track Artwork:
 - Label: SoundCloud artwork
   Origin Details: >-
-    From [A way to design a gear](https://forums.getpaint.net/topic/21651-a-way-to-design-a-gear/) getpaint.net thread
+    From getpaint.net thread ["A way to design a gear"](https://forums.getpaint.net/topic/21651-a-way-to-design-a-gear/)
   Source: >-
     [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/user-371879520/cog)
   Artists:
@@ -82,6 +83,7 @@ Sampled Tracks:
 - Upward Movement (Dave Owns)
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Husr:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/user-371879520/cog), 5/14/2017)
+
     Concerning Time.
 ---
 Track: Blastoff
@@ -108,6 +110,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - track:MeGaLoVania
 Commentary: |-
     <i>dbnet18:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/user-201967720/blastoff-feat-husr), 6/17/2017)
+
     A track that me and Husr made for Act Omega, but the full version! Special thanks to Husr for composing most of this!
 ---
 Track: Extermination
@@ -201,7 +204,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/extermination-alpha
 - https://soundcloud.com/user-371879520/exterminationworm
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Husr:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/extermination-alpha))
+    @@ [Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/extermination-alpha)
+
     Originally made for [Worm](https://parahumans.wordpress.com)
 ---
 Track: Meowlevatorstuck (Cat Tax)
@@ -219,5 +223,6 @@ URLs:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Elevatorstuck
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Joyfulldreams:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/meowlevatorstuck-cat-tax))
+    @@ [Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/meowlevatorstuck-cat-tax)
+
     Originally "Elevatorstuck (With Even More Meows)"
diff --git a/album/vast-error-vol-5-side-1.yaml b/album/vast-error-vol-5-side-1.yaml
index 22bf1c26..9cb09abe 100644
--- a/album/vast-error-vol-5-side-1.yaml
+++ b/album/vast-error-vol-5-side-1.yaml
@@ -272,6 +272,70 @@ URLs:
 - https://vasterror.bandcamp.com/track/indomitable
 - https://soundcloud.com/splitsuns/indomitable
 Lyrics: |-
+    @@ [Bandcamp lyrics](https://vasterror.bandcamp.com/track/indomitable)
+
+    Call me
+    When you answer
+    Slowly
+    Moving like the
+    Rage that's
+    Slipping through my soul
+    Hold me
+    Leave this planet
+    Kill me
+    Like somebody else that’s
+    Trying to control
+
+    I'm here
+    I'm free
+    From this
+    Indomitable
+    We're live
+    So here
+    I am
+    Indomitable
+
+    [unintelligible whispering]
+
+    Making sense of something
+    Wriggles through the outer wilds
+    Are you here with me?
+    Tear down, every fraction
+    Growing through a hell that faded
+    Into something more
+
+    ANOTHER NIGHT
+    ANOTHER CORPSE
+    ANOTHER DEAD SIDESHOW
+    NEW BLOOD ON MY OLD SHOES
+    BLOOD ON THE CANVAS
+    MY HEAD ON A PIKE
+    CHEERING FOR MY DEATH
+
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+
+    @@ [SoundCloud lyrics](https://soundcloud.com/splitsuns/indomitable)
+
     Call me when you answer
     Slowly moving like the rage that's
     Slipping through my soul
diff --git a/static-page/changelog.yaml b/static-page/changelog.yaml
index e17128ca..9b650538 100644
--- a/static-page/changelog.yaml
+++ b/static-page/changelog.yaml
@@ -293,12 +293,12 @@ Content: |-
     - added missing paragraph to Tumblr commentary for [[track:through-the-seventh-gate-land-of-heat-and-clockwork]] (thanks, Lilith!)
     - added Tumblr commentary to [[track:the-metamorphosis-of-rose-lalonde]] (thanks, Lilith, Lavender!)
     - added YouTube commentary to [[track:the-explored-ruins]] (thanks, Lan!)
+    - added SoundCloud commentary to [[track:terran-wanderer]], [[track:youd-do-it-for-randolph-scott]], [[track:code-red-and-existential-dread]], [[track:sortir]], [[track:commercial-break]], [[track:clamor-vast-error]], [[track:deep-sea-trouble]], [[track:immortal-vast-error]], [[track:my-protective-light]], [[track:nebula-vast-error]], [[track:good-old-hornless-jerryatric]], [[track:transmuted-vast-error]], [[track:minute-to-win-it]], [[track:arcjecs-theme]], [[track:murrits-theme]], [[track:made-for-spades]], [[track:indomitable-vast-error]], [[track:searching-for-answers]], [[track:mx-misery]], [[track:rejoice-and-be-merry]], [[track:jettison-vast-error-redux]], [[track:the-greater-good]], [[track:anode-tube]], and [[track:analemma]] (thanks, Lilith!)
     - added SoundCloud commentary to [[track:retconjuration]] and [[track:juju-breaker]] (thanks, Lilith!)
+    - added SoundCloud commentary to [[track:blastoff-early-access]] and [[track:extermination-early-access]] (thanks, Lilith!)
     - added SoundCloud commentary to [[track:nannas-new-groove]], [[track:the-dave-strider-experience]], and [[track:singularity-cosmic-caretakers]] (thanks, Lilith, Lan!)
     - added SoundCloud commentary to [[track:the-rarest-and-most-interpretive-dance-meatcabre]] (thanks, Lilith, Lan!)
     - added SoundCloud commentary to [[track:bloodsucker-brawl]] (thanks, Lan!)
-    - added SoundCloud commentary to [[track:blastoff-early-access]] and [[track:extermination-early-access]] (thanks, Lilith!)
-    - added SoundCloud commentary to [[track:terran-wanderer]], [[track:youd-do-it-for-randolph-scott]], [[track:code-red-and-existential-dread]], [[track:sortir]], [[track:commercial-break]], [[track:clamor-vast-error]], [[track:deep-sea-trouble]], [[track:immortal-vast-error]], [[track:my-protective-light]], [[track:nebula-vast-error]], [[track:good-old-hornless-jerryatric]], [[track:transmuted-vast-error]], [[track:minute-to-win-it]], [[track:arcjecs-theme]], [[track:murrits-theme]], [[track:made-for-spades]], [[track:indomitable-vast-error]], [[track:searching-for-answers]], [[track:mx-misery]], [[track:rejoice-and-be-merry]], [[track:jettison-vast-error-redux]], [[track:the-greater-good]], [[track:anode-tube]], and [[track:analemma]] (thanks, Lilith!)
     - added YouTube commentary to [[track:the-one-who-should-pay-is]] and [[track:battle-against-perfection]] (thanks, Lilith, Lan!)
     - added Tumblr commentary to [[album:comfortable-bugs]] (thanks, Lilith, Lan!)
     - added YouTube commentary to [[track:know-that-youre-mine]] (thanks, Lan!)
@@ -335,10 +335,11 @@ Content: |-
         - [[track:capricious-mistress]] (Bandcamp, YouTube, SoundCloud)
         - [[track:fuchsia-ruler]] (Bandcamp)
         - [[track:timeout-beforus]] (working title)
-        - [[track:year-one]], [[track:blastoff-early-access]], [[track:extermination-early-access]], [[track:extermination-alpha]], and [[track:meowlevatorstuck-cat-tax]] (SoundCloud, original name)
         - [[track:intermission-on-repeat]] and [[track:intermission-beyond-the-wall]] (album download)
         - [[track:final-bow]] (SoundCloud)
         - [[track:deep-sea-trouble]] (SoundCloud)
+        - [[track:year-one]], [[track:blastoff-early-access]], [[track:extermination-early-access]], and [[track:extermination-alpha]] (SoundCloud)
+        - [[track:meowlevatorstuck-cat-tax]] (original name)
         - [[track:lc-rains]] (SoundCloud)
         - [[track:our-tapestry-unfinished]] and [[track:bohemian-rhapsody-vast-error-mix-unfinished]] (album download)
         - [[track:purple-and-purple]] (name in booklet)
@@ -352,7 +353,7 @@ Content: |-
     - added MIDI files by HunZhen to [[track:nightlife-extended]] and [[track:jades-lullaby]] (thanks, HunZhen, Lan!)
     <!-- lyric additions -->
     - added booklet lyrics to [[track:eridans-theme]] (moved from artist commentary; thanks, Lan!)
-    - added artist's lyrics to [[track:indomitable-vast-error]] (thanks, Lilith!)
+    - added Bandcamp and SoundCloud lyrics to [[track:indomitable-vast-error]] (thanks, Lilith, Lan!)
     - added artist's lyrics across [[album:your-majesty]] (thanks, Lan, Whisper!)
     - added in-game lyrics to [[track:oh-one-true-love]] and [[track:oh-dungeon]] (thanks, ruby!)
     - added lyrics to [[track:the-smile-song]] (thanks, Lilith, Lan!)