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diff --git a/album/oceanfables-sovereign-lunacy.yaml b/album/oceanfables-sovereign-lunacy.yaml
index 4a135325..f26b028e 100644
--- a/album/oceanfables-sovereign-lunacy.yaml
+++ b/album/oceanfables-sovereign-lunacy.yaml
@@ -66,9 +66,9 @@ URLs:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>leiirue:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
-    <i>"يف ةيادبلا", or “In The Beginning”</i>
+    "<i>يف ةيادبلا</i>"<i>, or “In The Beginning”</i>
 
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ffcccc">One notable record states that she had a warm smile which could melt mountains, but bore a heart that was harder than stone</p>.”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ffcccc">One notable record states that she had a warm smile which could melt mountains, but bore a heart that was harder than stone</span>.”</i>
 
     This song is a complete 180 from [[track:lunacy-prelude|Prelude]], but that’s because I wanted to make it a kind of ‘sickeningly sweet’. I thought that’d fit for someone like The Beginning - with such a wonderful exterior and a bitter interior. There were so many iterations of the song that I wasn’t happy with, and eventually ended up with this as the final! I’m not sure if I made it sound too much like baby music though, haha ^^;;
 
@@ -85,9 +85,9 @@ URLs:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>leiirue:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
-    <i>"成長", or “Growth”</i>
+    "<i>成長</i>"<i>, or “Growth”</i>
     
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ccffcc">A crafty king and talented bladesmith, whose gift is the Grassblade</p>.”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ccffcc">A crafty king and talented bladesmith, whose gift is the Grassblade</span>.”</i>
 
     I started the song off with woodwinds, since The Cunning created the Grassblade. Woodwinds remind me of plants for some reason. I wanted to give it a calm atmosphere at the start, and make it evolve after that, honestly just for fun! I just went with vibes somewhat for this one, and I think it turned out pretty good :)
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@@ -103,9 +103,9 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>leiirue:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
-    <i>"فافش", or “Transparent”</i>
+    "<i>فافش</i>"<i>, or “Transparent”</i>
 
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ccccff">A reserved king whose gift is the Shadow Blood of Umbra</p>.”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ccccff">A reserved king whose gift is the Shadow Blood of Umbra</span>.”</i>
 
     Honestly, I REALLY wanted to use the [[track:blood-pact]] motif! [[artist:witchs-cadence|Witch’s Cadence’s]] music is quite good, and I recommend checking out her Oceanfalls album [[album:oceanfables-ethological|“Ethological”]] if you haven’t. I also went on vibes for this one - a slow song seemed to fit The Unseen more than a fast paced one. Maybe I could’ve made it calmer, but I think it’s a good song for all of the Umbra clan as well, so !!
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@@ -124,9 +124,9 @@ URLs:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>leiirue:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
-    <i>"絶望の少女", or “The Despair Girl”</i>
+    "<i>絶望の少女</i>"<i>, or “The Despair Girl”</i>
 
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ffccff">A soft-spoken queen whose gift is the Shadow Seal</p>.”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ffccff">A soft-spoken queen whose gift is the Shadow Seal</span>.”</i>
 
     I tried to make The Reformer’s theme quite soft, but still giving off the feeling of despair, due to her book being called “Diary of the Despair Girl”. And also due to the fact that she’s an exorcist, I made the song slightly unsettling.
 
@@ -144,9 +144,9 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>leiirue:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
-    <i>"حافس", or “Slaughterer”</i>
+    "<i>حافس</i>"<i>, or “Slaughterer”</i>
 
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ffcccc">Could nothing erase that smug, mocking smile off of his wretched face</p>?”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ffcccc">Could nothing erase that smug, mocking smile off of his wretched face</span>?”</i>
 
     I made this song snappy and energetic, because I thought it’d fit The Merciless’ sly, smug self. It uses the leitmotif from [[track:judgement-by-genocide|“Judgement by Genocide”]], the song about his rampage of killing everyone. Funny that his general theme came after that! :P
 
@@ -168,9 +168,9 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>leiirue:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
-    <i>"Αποκατάσταση", or “Restoration”</i>
+    "<i>Αποκατάσταση</i>"<i>, or “Restoration”</i>
 
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ccebff">A childish king whose gift is a newly revived world, brimming with life in all colors. It is said that he had an immense love for his people, and properly exemplified how a Celestial should be in all aspects</p>.”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ccebff">A childish king whose gift is a newly revived world, brimming with life in all colors. It is said that he had an immense love for his people, and properly exemplified how a Celestial should be in all aspects</span>.”</i>
 
     I just HAD to make the song bouncy and joyful for The Unnatural! He’s probably my favourite of the ten. He’s the one really friendly celestial, so I thought a song like this would be absolutely perfect for him. I actually made this one while in class!
 
@@ -200,9 +200,9 @@ URLs:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>leiirue:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
-    <i>"Nameless Song" or "Song of Eternity" - ‘Bezimiena’ could mean eternity and ‘Bezimienna’ means nameless</i>
+    "<i>Nameless Song</i>" <i>or</i> "<i>Song of Eternity</i>" <i>- ‘Bezimiena’ could mean eternity and ‘Bezimienna’ means nameless</i>
 
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ccccff">A solitary queen whose gift is the Song of Sight</p>.”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ccccff">A solitary queen whose gift is the Song of Sight</span>.”</i>
 
     The Herald’s whole theme is music, so I thought “why not give her a classical song?” It’s heavily inspired by Dmitri Shostakovich’s second waltz, especially because she seems to have an Eastern European influence, judging by Nights’ works. I tried to make it feel very… “musical”? I’m not too sure on how to explain it, but I wanted it to sound very classical and old.
 
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ URLs:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>leiirue:</i> (commentary booklet)
 
-    <i>"Divine Wrath"</i>
+    "<i>Divine Wrath</i>"
 
     <i>“An amiable, innovative king, whose gift is the Dewinger, a masterfully crafted tool of extraction.”</i>
 
@@ -234,9 +234,9 @@ Referenced Tracks:
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     <i>leiirue:</i> (commentary booklet)
 
-    <i>"Ideal Library"</i>
+    "<i>Ideal Library</i>"
 
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ffcccc">A joyous queen whose gift is the Grand Library on the moo</p>n.”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ffcccc">A joyous queen whose gift is the Grand Library on the moo</span>n.”</i>
 
     I have no proof that she’s French. All I know is that the term really fit her and I leaned into it. The song is basically just a French sounding remix of [[track:wieczna-wiedza]], and to be honest I think that kind of fits The Vibrant. Accordions are a very joyous instrument to me for some reason, so I think it fits her.
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@@ -254,9 +254,9 @@ URLs:
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     <i>leiirue:</i> (commentary booklet)
 
-    <i>"دبلأا عشجلاي", or “Endless Greed”</i>
+    "<i>دبلأا عشجلاي</i>"<i>, or “Endless Greed”</i>
 
-    <i>“<p style="color: #ffffcc">An indefatigable queen who was only recently crowned. The ruler of all rulers, who stands at the peak of the hierarchy of worlds, illuminated by the light of total dominance</p>.”</i>
+    <i>“<span style="color: #ffffcc">An indefatigable queen who was only recently crowned. The ruler of all rulers, who stands at the peak of the hierarchy of worlds, illuminated by the light of total dominance</span>.”</i>
 
     I actually used two motifs here! Both from songs that have yet to be released, however. I’m honestly not a huge fan of what I did for it, but I hope you enjoy it despite that. The tempo changes were very fun! I wanted to make it sound menacing yet have a sort of… “sweet” note to it? To be honest this is two motifs mashed together. HOWEVER, I did compose one of them so it’s not like I was lazy or anything!!
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