synthetica commentary formatting tweaks

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/album/synthetica.yaml b/album/synthetica.yaml
index 447ce409..db4e62d2 100644
--- a/album/synthetica.yaml
+++ b/album/synthetica.yaml
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Color: '#4f84f5'
 Groups:
 - Beyond
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>nal1200:</i> ([Newgrounds news post, excerpt](https://electronicep.newgrounds.com/news/post/262303))
+    <i>nal1200:</i> ([Newgrounds news post](https://electronicep.newgrounds.com/news/post/262303), excerpt)
 
     <b>Synthetica EP News!</b>
 
@@ -35,11 +35,9 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I'd like to thank everyone that purchases the EP, and i'd like to put out a special thanks to everyone that's helped promote it.
 
-    Be sure to tune in to Radiogrounds as well for some great NG music, as well as much, much more. The DJs there are local users here on NG, and I must say it's by far the best radio station EVAR!
+    Be sure to tune in to [Radiogrounds](https://web.archive.org/web/20090424111800/http://radiogrounds.com/) as well for some great NG music, as well as much, much more. The DJs there are local users here on NG, and I must say it's by far the best radio station EVAR!
 
-    <i>nal1200:</i>
-
-    ([Synthetica demo track](https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/212058))
+    <i>nal1200:</i> ([Newgrounds demo track description](https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/212058), excerpt)
 
     A demo track for the Audio Portal's Electronic EP: Syntethica!
 
@@ -122,13 +120,13 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song comes off my recent "Exposure" release. You can buy it on Amazon/iTunes, or you could listen to it here for free :P
 
-    (dead MySpace link)
+    ([dead MySpace link](https://myspace.com/quarldnb))
 
     EDIT: It's 2021 now and I can't believe this linked to a myspace page. Have a recent ["remaster"](https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/997824) download, free.
 
-    <i>Quarl:</i> (composer, [Newgrounds description, remaster, excerpt](https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/997824))
+    <i>Quarl:</i> (composer, [Newgrounds remaster description](https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/997824), excerpt)
 
-    Yet another remaster nobody asked for. Originally written circa 2008, I took this down at some point because I thought I was going to be rich and famous or some shit. Not a single label wanted this however. As a result this was reuploaded at some point but then I took it down again after somebody used it in a <b>really shitty hentai game</b> circa 2010. Truth be told, I'm far more mature now and would be honored if somebody used this in their shitty hentai game. No really, go for it. I'll even provide the <b><i>sex noises</i></b> if you <b>ask nicely.</b>
+    Yet another remaster nobody asked for. Originally written circa 2008, I took this down at some point because I thought I was going to be rich and famous or some shit. Not a single label wanted this however. As a result this was reuploaded at some point but then I took it down again after somebody used it in a <b>really shitty hentai game</b> circa 2010. Truth be told, I'm far more mature now and would be honored if somebody used this in their shitty hentai game. No really, go for it. I'll even provide the <b><i>sex noises</i></b> if you <b>ask nicely.</b> ([dead Shopify link](https://cdn.shopify.com/s/files/1/0265/3475/products/3295_largeview_06d4bdc2-ed06-4061-b87f-9ceca33ca248.jpeg?v=1475254019))
 
     The original 2008 rsn file was so much fun to look at. I'm surprised there was even a back up after crashing my PC so many times. I've lost plenty of other song files over the years. It was surprisingly clean to look at. Added some new sounds to this version but I didn't want to over do it. This track was good enough as it was when it was written. Mostly just boosting levels and adding some fidelity. Opted to keep that subby bass intro, sorry if you listen in on lofi speakers and can't pick up that bass.
 
@@ -148,10 +146,14 @@ Track: Happiness (BeatSource Remix)
 Artists:
 - BeatSource
 URLs:
-- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXJ_ixUQEjM #this upload and another one are missing 40 seconds of the total duration, it's the best I could find
+- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXJ_ixUQEjM
 Referenced Tracks:
 - track:happiness-dj-splatta
 Duration: '3:45'
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Lilithtreasure:</i> (wiki editor)
+
+    this upload and another one are missing 40 seconds of the total duration, it's the best I could find
 ---
 Track: Adrenaline
 Artists: