general cognitive coalescence review

2 files changed, 12 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/album/cognitive-coalescence.yaml b/album/cognitive-coalescence.yaml
index 3c883c45..40e9c24f 100644
--- a/album/cognitive-coalescence.yaml
+++ b/album/cognitive-coalescence.yaml
@@ -13,22 +13,24 @@ Color: '#0dbaff'
 Groups:
 - Fandom
 Art Tags:
-- John
 - June
+- Pop-a-matic Vrillyhoo Hammer
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Witch's Cadence:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://witchscadence.bandcamp.com/track/cognitive-coalescence))
-
-    Art by the fantastic [[artist:soritotito]]<br>
-    References: [[Doctor]] by [[artist:buzinkai]], [[Moonsetter]] and [[track:penumbra-phantasm]] by [[artist:toby-fox]], [[Showtime (Original Mix)|Showtime]] by [[artist:malcolm-brown]] and [[track:under-the-hat|Under the Hat]] by [[artist:erik-scheele]]
-
-    <i>Witch's Cadence:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/witchs-cadence/cognitive-coalescence), 7/24/2024)
+    <i>Witch's Cadence:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/witchs-cadence/cognitive-coalescence), excerpt, 7/24/2024)
 
     Take 2
+Credit Sources: |-
+    <i>Witch's Cadence:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://witchscadence.bandcamp.com/track/cognitive-coalescence) / [SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/witchs-cadence/cognitive-coalescence), excerpts)
 
-    Art by the fantastic [[artist:soritotito]]<br>
-    Find him here: [www.tumblr.com/soritotito88](https://soritotito88.tumblr.com)
+    Art by the fantastic [[artist:soritotito]]
 
     References: [[Doctor]] by [[artist:buzinkai]], [[Moonsetter]] and [[track:penumbra-phantasm]] by [[artist:toby-fox]], [[Showtime (Original Mix)|Showtime]] by [[artist:malcolm-brown]] and [[track:under-the-hat|Under the Hat]] by [[artist:erik-scheele]]
+
+    <i>Lilithtreasure, Witch's Cadence|[[artist:witchs-cadence]]:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1348448041350467655), excerpt, 3/9/2025)
+
+    > <i>[[artist:lilithtreasure]]:</i> is the land in the artwork non-descript or is it a particular planet
+
+    non-descript
 ---
 Track: Cognitive Coalescence
 Date First Released: July 24, 2024
diff --git a/static-page/changelog.yaml b/static-page/changelog.yaml
index efb34635..2102b4bb 100644
--- a/static-page/changelog.yaml
+++ b/static-page/changelog.yaml
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Content: |-
     <h3>site changes</h3>
     <h3>album additions</h3>
     - added [[album:some-artifacts-may-occur]] by [[artist:shinokabe]] (thanks, Lilith, Lan!)
-    - added [[album:cognitive-coalescence]] from [[artist:witchs-cadence]] (thanks, Lilith!)
+    - added [[album:cognitive-coalescence]] by [[artist:witchs-cadence]] (thanks, Lilith, Lan!)
     <h3>other additions</h3>
     <h3>data changes</h3>
     <h3>data fixes</h3>