cobalt corsair tumblr citation, bronze brawling soundcloud (and description), and maid in spades tumblr commentary

3 files changed, 14 insertions, 2 deletions

diff --git a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a.yaml b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a.yaml
index 0b6fa0bf..21fa0381 100644
--- a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a.yaml
+++ b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a.yaml
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Hallowed Halls
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Max Wright:</i> (via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
+    <i>Max Wright:</i> ([Tumblr](https://imbrog.tumblr.com/post/26895006459/cobalt-corsair-commentary), 7/10/2012)
 
     For those of you who didn't know, Cobalt Corsair was originally a theme for Hussie. The song being given to Mindfang, while some find it hilariously ironic, I find to be a lot more fitting. I do have a tendency to write piratey sounding orchestral songs; this time it just happened to be accidental! For this commentary, I'm going to be dividing the song up both by sections and instrument groups.
 
diff --git a/album/lofam3.yaml b/album/lofam3.yaml
index d1a66c1a..0e698763 100644
--- a/album/lofam3.yaml
+++ b/album/lofam3.yaml
@@ -1905,6 +1905,11 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     But really, it was never meant to.
 
+    <i>Max Wright:</i> ([Tumblr](https://imbrog.tumblr.com/post/29921577143/maid-in-spades-this-is-a-piece-i-did-in-reply-to), 8/21/2012)
+    
+    Maid in Spades
+
+    This is a piece I did in reply to [[track:pirates-of-alternia-dead-trolls-chest|THIS]] remix, by [[artist:willow-ascenzo|wellmanicuredmusic]], of [[Cobalt Corsair]]. So this is a remix of [[Rust Servant]], a swingin' romp that uses the same thematic material in a jazzier way. Does it fit the character of the handmaid? Nope, but it was never meant to.
     <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist)
 
     The song is very uplifting, but you can't really draw Handmaid without making her glare really hard, can you?
@@ -1996,7 +2001,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <i>Ducky Senpai:</i> (track artist)
 
-    Oh look, it appears I've done yet another track art for Ascenzo. I'm kind of like Will's artist stalker.
+    Oh look, it appears I've done yet another track art for Ascenzo. I'm kind of like Willow's artist stalker.
 ---
 Track: Sunsoaked Heavenscape
 Artists:
diff --git a/album/p-s.yaml b/album/p-s.yaml
index 76cd1817..b53cf5c0 100644
--- a/album/p-s.yaml
+++ b/album/p-s.yaml
@@ -455,8 +455,15 @@ Artists:
 Duration: '2:44'
 URLs:
 - https://casualsunday.bandcamp.com/track/bronze-brawling
+- https://soundcloud.com/mxwright/bronze-brawling
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Dapper Dueling
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Max Wright:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/mxwright/bronze-brawling))
+
+    Pow! Here's something nobody was asking for - a rootin tootin brawling theme for Skylla Koriga. The in-game music felt a little too relaxed at times given all the action, so this song here takes names, chews cud and kicks ass.
+
+    Consider this a successor to [[Dapper Dueling]], an older track of mine that was used as the BGM for the Skylla route.
 ---
 Track: Infinity's Lament
 Artists: