replaced bowman early commentary citations with those from tumblr

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
index b75d4dca..9debeb81 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Another Jungle - Purple1222119 (flash version).mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]], excerpt)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20181217221129/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/post/25249439835/everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know-about-another), excerpt, 6/16/2012)
 
     Before this track was [[flash:4665|used]] in Homestuck along with Beatfox's [[track:a-taste-for-adventure|"A Taste for Adventure"]], it was actually made for a nearly 3-year-old defunct fan project. Housetrapped was a story about an alternate Sburb session and "Another Jungle" was a the-same-but-different theme for the loading screen of that universe's Sburb client. Sound familiar?
 
@@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
 
     (Awesome! That was totally rad to the max! I could just keep doing this all day... NOT! I've got games to play, and if you think I'm gonna slow down just to talk to a bunch of amateurs, then you need to seriously blow the dust out of your cartridges. But hey, girls, whenever you need to show those creepy boys who's boss, just remember that GameGrl's got your back. Look for me on specially-marked boxes of Betty Crocker brand snacks and have an adult call the toll-free number to subscribe to the exclusive girls-only GameGrl Magazine. Alright, check you later girlfriends!)
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/seeyoutmorra/25256571587/iambowman-everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know), around 6/16/2012)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20181217213819/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/post/25256423852/everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know-about-gamegrl), 6/16/2012)
 
     Originally we'd planned on doing a Homestuck album that was devoted entirely to the Sburb Alpha kids and their session, all of us doing tracks that would parallel earlier tracks in a same-but-different fashion. While this album became Homestuck Vol. 9, a lot of analogous tracks remained from the original concept, including this track as an alternative to [[track:gamebro-original-1990-mix|"GameBro (Original 1990 Mix)"]] from Homestuck Vol. 6: Heir Transparent.
 
@@ -810,13 +810,13 @@ Cover Art File Extension: jpg
 Art Tags:
 - Maplehoof
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]], excerpt)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20181217215239/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/post/25318296794/everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know-about), excerpt, 6/17/2012)
 
     I get the feeling that down the line there will be an explanation for why exactly there's a tiny Maplehoof on Dirk Strider's desk and it will be one of the biggest plot revelations in all of Homestuck. For me it was a cue that there needed to be a Sburb Alpha universe parallel for the song [[track:maplehoofs-adventure]], which in itself was a spiritual sequel to [[Pony Chorale]]. It's sort of a reality check to realize that I have written not one, not two, but three songs for cartoon ponies now - I guess that's part of this disease we call the Internet.
 
     As with the previous installments, I used a sample of Tavia Morra saying "neigh" to punctuate phrases, this time sped up to about double speed to have that chipmunk-esque effect. Everything about this song is a bit faster-paced and squeakier to reflect the stature of the tiny horse. The orchestration was largely inspired by my last trip to Disneyland - the whistles are arranged to sound a bit like the teapots from Alice in Wonderland, and the horn synths were selected because of their resemblance to a merry-go-round organ.
 
-    Along with recent tracks like [[track:another-jungle]] and [[track:elephant-gun]], this song represents one of my attempts to stick less closely to a predictable song form. The key signature moves up a whole step around 32 seconds in and never comes back down, and the main repeated refrain that ties the song together is the little cadence that shows up at the end of each section. I stuck to my guns as a high school music theory student on this one, mostly drawing from Mozart and Sousa - it's an overstimulating mess of counterpoint, and my main goal was to see if it would annoy composition major Erik Scheele (it worked).
+    Along with recent tracks like [[track:another-jungle]] and [[track:elephant-gun]], this song represents one of my attempts to stick less closely to a predictable song form. The key signature moves up a whole step around 32 seconds in and never comes back down, and the main repeated refrain that ties the song together is the little cadence that shows up at the end of each section. I stuck to my guns as a high school music theory student on this one, mostly drawing from Mozart and Sousa - it's an overstimulating mess of counterpoint, and my main goal was to see if it would annoy composition major [[artist:erik-scheele]] (it worked).
 
     Out of all the tracks for Volume 9 I worked on, this one was a real breeze. I was on such a roll that I considered making it ten minutes long just to piss off everyone, but I knew that I'd most likely be asked to cut it down if I'd gone to that kind of excess, and I had other tracks to work on.
 
@@ -931,7 +931,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Jake
 - Tavros' lusus
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/kitten-burrito/25391031646/iambowman-everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know), excerpt, around 6/18/2012)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20181217214959/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/post/25321675570/everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know-about-elephant), excerpt, 6/17/2012)
 
     This is pure Jake strife music - I started this project with the definite goal in mind to make something that sounded purely like video game music for a battle. Jake English is sort of the archetypal Roosevelt-type swashbuckler with all the bravado of a turn-of-the-century primitivist. For him, the palette of sounds is instantaneous: heavy percussion rumbling at a breakneck pace. I threw in chimes, timpani, xylophone, glockenspiel, cymbal crashes, and an uncompromising drum machine to get the atmosphere I wanted.
 
@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
     FEEL FEEL FEEL FEEL GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD<br>FEEL FEEL FEEL FEEL GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD<br>(Bustin' makes me feel good!)<br>FEEL FEEL FEEL FEEL GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD<br>FEEL FEEL FEEL FEEL GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD<br>(Bustin' makes me feel good!)
     Bu-bu-bu-bustin' makes me feel good!<br>Bu-bu-bu-bustin'!<br>Bu-bu-bu-bu-bustin'!<br>Bu-bu-bu-bustin' makes me feel good!
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]], excerpt)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20181217221127/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/post/25336980539/everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know-about-busting), excerpt, 6/17/2012)
 
     This track was an attempt to try something in the same vain as the soundtrack to Jet Set Radio Future which was recommended to me by friends [[artist:erik-scheele|Erik Scheele]] and [[artist:richard-gung|Richard Gung]]. Composer Hideki Naganuma has created some of the most intricate and engaging pieces of dance music I've ever heard - his signature approach is his construction of entire songs around only a handful of samples (check out ["Funky Dealer"](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XpAF8bGm-MM) for a good example).
 
@@ -1156,7 +1156,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Tavros
 - Vriska
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]], excerpt)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20181217214957/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/post/25387008672/everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know-about), excerpt, 6/18/2012)
 
     Before there was 20+ hours of music in the Homestuck catalog, the music team's task was to create new themes at a moment's notice for new elements of the story. When Tavrisprite appeared in the comic, I challenged myself to make a suitable theme at the same pace I might once have cobbled something together back in 2009. I posted the resulting demo track on my Soundcloud the same day as the character made its debut.
 
@@ -1235,7 +1235,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
     Bring your wife and trouble, it can never trouble you
     Make her a member of the Midnight Crew!
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]], excerpt)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20181217215206/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/post/25388396201/everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know-about-im-a), excerpt, 6/18/2012)
 
     One of the things I'd always felt was curious about our re-appropriation of the [[track:im-a-member-of-the-midnight-crew|hundred-year-old vaudeville track]] by Eddie Morton was the complete contrast between its cheerful mood and the sinister nature of the characters it represents. The Midnight Crew, while fashion-savvy, are cold-blooded murderers, and I'd been curious as to what a darker version of their signature song might sound like.
 
@@ -1938,7 +1938,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Another Jungle
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]], excerpt)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20181217213920/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/post/25389363191/everything-you-ever-wanted-to-know-about-another), excerpt, 6/18/2012)
 
     I've mentioned a few times that Homestuck Vol. 9, in its early planning stages, was conceived as an album that would be dedicated to the new session of Homestuck, and most of the tracks would mimic older songs re-imagined in the new universe presented in Act 6. "Another Countdown" was thus the sister song of [[track:sburban-countdown|"Sburban Countdown"]] - both are brief arrangements of their parent songs ([[track:another-jungle|"Another Jungle"]] and [[track:sburban-jungle|"Sburban Jungle"]] respectively) meant to crescendo towards a major climax.