frog hunt tweaks + changelog

also a changelog name fix

2 files changed, 10 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-8.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-8.yaml
index 081203cd..2ccc7951 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-8.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-8.yaml
@@ -514,8 +514,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Michael Guy Bowman, DrPepperFan|[[artist:michael-guy-bowman]]:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20120118163148/http://iambowman.tumblr.com/), around 1/17/2012)
 
-    Uh oh, [[artist:erik-scheele|Jit]] and I showed up to the album with the same song idea. That's like two girls showing up the party in the same dress. Awkward! Good thing for Jit and I that, like the two girls in that famous scenario, we each have our own swagga and wear those dresses like the hot young messes we are. Wow, don't quote me on that. 
-    (Too late - [[artist:drpepperfan|DPF]])
+    Uh oh, [[artist:erik-scheele|Jit]] and I showed up to the album with the same song idea. That's like two girls showing up the party in the same dress. Awkward! Good thing for Jit and I that, like the two girls in that famous scenario, we each have our own swagga and wear those dresses like the hot young messes we are. Wow, don't quote me on that.
 
     Anyway, while [[track:frog-forager|"Frog Forager"]] is almost immediate in its "aw man, yeah, it's THIS kind of tune" factor for avid listeners of Homestuck music, my ditty "Frog Hunt" seems to hit a lot of people out of left field. Maybe it's because I was busy surprising myself with this one as well.
 
@@ -523,6 +522,12 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     The point of this song was to kind of put the action, the drama, and all that teenage chemistry on hold so I could focus on a moment in the story that might be just a little bit more peaceful. Going on a safari for frogs on a newly-awakened alien forest world seems to beckon a very different angle than the heated stakes typically associated with Homestuck. Plus, I've always felt that the environment of Homestuck deserves a little more attention given that nearly 99% of all art generated by the fans are homages to their favorite characters and not the fantastic places imagined by [[artist:andrew-hussie|Andrew]].
 
+    <i>drpepperfan:</i> (via [[media:misc/commentary-collection.txt|early commentary collection]], excerpt)
+
+    > <i>[[artist:michael-guy-bowman]]:</i> Uh oh, [[artist:erik-scheele|Jit]] and I showed up to the album with the same song idea. That's like two girls showing up the party in the same dress. Awkward! Good thing for Jit and I that, like the two girls in that famous scenario, we each have our own swagga and wear those dresses like the hot young messes we are. Wow, don't quote me on that.
+
+    Too late - [[artist:drpepperfan|DPF]]
+
     <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([Michael Guy Bowman Talks About His Homestuck Music](https://youtu.be/85VXWZTg-vo?t=1864), adapted to text, 7/20/2024)
 
     Frog Hunt was atmospheric and kind of based on, like, a weather report.
diff --git a/static-page/changelog.yaml b/static-page/changelog.yaml
index a6ce4671..e84f15b8 100644
--- a/static-page/changelog.yaml
+++ b/static-page/changelog.yaml
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ Content: |-
     - added dates for Tumblr commentary on [[track:condescescion]] and [[track:patient]] (thanks, Lan!)
     <h3>data changes</h3>
     <!-- misc presentational changes -->
-    - replaced most YouTube playback links for Homestuck flashes ([[flash-side:s1|side 1]], [[flash-side:s2|side 2]]) with timestamped links to Bambosh's ['[S] Homestuck - All flashes'](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AEIOQN3YmNc), replacing YouTube links in 60 flashes, and adding YouTube links to 46 flashes missing them altogether (thanks, Meulanie, Lan!)
+    - replaced most YouTube playback links for Homestuck flashes ([[flash-side:s1|side 1]], [[flash-side:s2|side 2]]) with timestamped links to Bambosh's ['[S] Homestuck - All flashes'](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AEIOQN3YmNc), replacing YouTube links in 60 flashes, and adding YouTube links to 46 flashes missing them altogether (thanks, meulanie, Lan!)
     - added dates to all wiki editor commentary, showing when the entries were actually written or heavily revised, mostly based off the data repository's git commit history (thanks, Amberlina, Whisper!)
     - filled out details for [[track:velkommen-stan-lepard]], previously named "Windows XP Installation Music" with duration 5:22 and no commentary (thanks, vriska, Lan!)
     <h3>data fixes</h3>
@@ -154,10 +154,11 @@ Content: |-
     - fixed a couple composer and track artist commentary transcription typos: (thanks, Lilith!)
         - [[track:dawn-of-man]]: was *of train*, now *of a train*
         - [[track:out-of-breath]]: was *gneius*, now *genius*
-    - tweaked formatting of Tumblr commentary for [[track:frog-hunt]] (DPF now links to [[artist:drpepperfan]]; line originated from early commentary collection and was not originally part of the Tumblr commentary; thanks, Lan, Lilith!)
     - tweaked formatting of Bowmantown commentary for [[album:homestuck-vol-10]] ("Jungle Boogie" now links to [[track:jungle-boogie]]; thanks, Lilith!)
     <!-- art tag fixes -->
     - fixed [[track:stormspirit]] missing [[tag:lowas]] tag (thanks, meulanie, Lilith!)
+    <!-- commentary fixes -->
+    - fixed a "Too late - DPF" line showing under Tumblr commentary for [[track:frog-hunt]], instead of in its own entry, originating from early commentary collection (thanks, Lilith, Lanolin!)
     <!-- link fixes -->
     - changed YouTube listening link for [[track:hometeam-adv8ntage]] to composer's upload (thanks, Lilith!)
     - fixed YouTube listening link for [[track:train-requiem]] being given to [[track:train-meldey-next-to-last-station]] instead (thanks, Makin!)